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sharod
4th of February 2008 (Mon), 07:55
Same shot, second is just cropped more. I would really like to hang this on my wall but am stuck as to which one to use.

Any C&C would be greatly appreciated!!!

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y71/wdwmom2/20071118019.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y71/wdwmom2/Copyof20071118019.jpg

jillybean
4th of February 2008 (Mon), 09:45
For me #1- ( but your cropped picture is awfully close to the same as orig)

Jamie Holladay
4th of February 2008 (Mon), 09:46
#1 for me as well.

CincyShooter
4th of February 2008 (Mon), 09:47
numero uno

stathunter
4th of February 2008 (Mon), 09:48
Could be my monitor but what about bumping up the saturation a bit--to make them pop.

sharod
4th of February 2008 (Mon), 09:53
For me #1- ( but your cropped picture is awfully close to the same as orig)

The cropped one is very close to the original, just wasn't sure how much of the mill I wanted to take up the pic.


Could be my monitor but what about bumping up the saturation a bit--to make them pop.

Actually, this is with the saturation bumped up. I printed it out using Mpix with the sat slightly higher than what you are seeing here and it just looked too saturated. Maybe I will go back and rework it alittle.

Thank you everyone. I do appreciate your opinions!!!

Apollo11
4th of February 2008 (Mon), 20:56
#2 for me. Just add a touch of saturation and a touch of contrast. Great image!

Katbird
4th of February 2008 (Mon), 21:08
#1... You get the whole picture. Really it's beautiful I wouldn't crop out any of the colorful surroundings.

Radtech1
4th of February 2008 (Mon), 22:27
I would use THIS one. Your first post but vingetted.

http://dc15.4shared.com/download/36892955/f523a37e/200711180191.jpg

Angdvl089
4th of February 2008 (Mon), 23:01
I like the tighter crop of #2 but it would be nice to see more of the rocks and trees on the right like in #1.

FlyingPhotog
4th of February 2008 (Mon), 23:03
I'd use #1. In #2, you'll lose the tree camera right behind the matte since it's so close to the edge.

SomeDudeD
5th of February 2008 (Tue), 01:58
i really like 1, how about this.?

cfcRebel
5th of February 2008 (Tue), 13:18
Radtech1's vignetting effect adds magic to the already beautiful #1.

kato1
5th of February 2008 (Tue), 17:43
^ Absolutely agree.

kmorgan
6th of February 2008 (Wed), 20:23
I also liked the first shot. I would increase the saturation and contrast myself. Here I used LAB mode and steepened the A and B channels at the top and bottom 20% each and moved the Lightness channel curve on the dark end to the bottom of the histogram.

Kevin

Jim G
6th of February 2008 (Wed), 20:25
First one for me - the crop works better than the second.

sharod
6th of February 2008 (Wed), 20:51
Wow, you guys are giving me alot to think about!! Looks like #1 is more appealing to the majority of you.

And to you people that did some editing....you're hired:lol:;)! Great jobs!! Guess I will work on the pic myself this weekend.

Thank you all for your responses, they are appreciated!!

Radtech1
6th of February 2008 (Wed), 22:18
Just to give you an idea of how I achieved my effect thought I would post a couple of quick "work in progress" shots.

To begin with I created a duplicate layer on top of the background layer (by default Photoshop calls this new top layer "Background Copy" - I'll just call it top layer because it's easier.)

Then, working on the top layer, I selected the "Oval Marquee" tool, with the Feather set at 100 pixels. I put the crosshairs well below the bottom of the picture underneath of the rock on the left. I proceeded to drag the crosshair up and to the right until it was above the mill. That gave me a selection that is outlined by the red oval on the first post here. When you release the mouse the oval will get smaller, nothing to worry about.

I then cut that selection out (in Windows CTRL+X) which left a very soft edge hole in the middle of the top layer. This is what you see in the second post here, except the transparent area is rendered as white here.

Radtech1
6th of February 2008 (Wed), 22:30
Once you have the top layer appropriately prepared all that remains is to select the Blend Mode and Opacity. As you can see from the first post here I chose "Multiply" as the blend mode and 75% as the opacity. The final result is the bottom post here.

By the way, compositionally, this is an excellent shot. I envy the fact that you have this type of subject close at hand.

You might be wondering why your second version above does not work. It is because the crop on the right-hand side cuts off the leading line. As a viewer, when I look at your first version, the first thing I see is the stream at the bottom of the frame, my eyes follow the stream to the right, and the bank of the stream gently pushes my attention back upstream, into the photograph, up to the mill. But on your second crop, as my vision starts to follow that line, all of the sudden: BOINK! I slam into the arbitrary artificial frame that you put there, which cuts off the natural framing provided by the streams bank.

In every situation I can think of, and especially for nature/landscape shots, I will take natural framing over artificial every day of the week and twice on Sunday. And I think Robert Lay will back me up on that.

Rad

Bill Boehme
6th of February 2008 (Wed), 23:03
The first one! And it is very good work, BTW.

Could be my monitor but what about bumping up the saturation a bit--to make them pop.

I can't tell if you were kidding or actually serious. If serious, I suspect that your monitor is way out of adjustment.

Glenn NK
6th of February 2008 (Wed), 23:51
By the way, compositionally, this is an excellent shot. I envy the fact that you have this type of subject close at hand.

You might be wondering why your second version above does not work. It is because the crop on the right-hand side cuts off the leading line. As a viewer, when I look at your first version, the first thing I see is the stream at the bottom of the frame, my eyes follow the stream to the right, and the bank of the stream gently pushes my attention back upstream, into the photograph, up to the mill. But on your second crop, as my vision starts to follow that line, all of the sudden: BOINK! I slam into the arbitrary artificial frame that you put there, which cuts off the natural framing provided by the streams bank.

In every situation I can think of, and especially for nature/landscape shots, I will take natural framing over artificial every day of the week and twice on Sunday. And I think Robert Lay will back me up on that.

Rad

Very well put - and I will also back you up on this line of reasoning.

And thanks for the tutorial - very interesting and useful.

sharod
7th of February 2008 (Thu), 05:57
Just to give you an idea of how I achieved my effect thought I would post a couple of quick "work in progress" shots.

Thank you for posting this. After I saw your editing, I googled how to vignette in Photoshop Elements 5. I found many articles, picked the one I understood the best, and went to work.

I admit, I am more of a beginner at PSE 5, messed up somewhere along the way, and it didn't turn out. This weekend I will use your instructions and see what I come up with.

Thank you again. And thank you guys for the new responses!!

Andrushka
7th of February 2008 (Thu), 06:02
#2 for me with more contrast and saturation