View Full Version : C&C Please on these Product Shots.....The boos is my wife on this one (Gulp)
PETERSYMES
5th of February 2008 (Tue), 17:06
Interested to get C&C on these shots i have taken for my wifes wedding stationary business.
What could i do differently,Better, Lighting are they over proped?
The cards are all 100% handmade and was trying to convey quality and use these shots as main category headers for web site, details shots to support.
Do they convey quality?
All feedback gratefully received (normally do landscapes)
Flo
5th of February 2008 (Tue), 17:10
They turned out well Peter.I would like to see a little more of the boxed set of cards, letters etc....
DAMphyne
5th of February 2008 (Tue), 20:32
I think the Stationary looks like a good product.
The photos however need to be tweaked.
First photo has a distracting background and the table-top is not a good color for the product style. A full white back ground and include more of the cards, The face of the card is way too cut off and the information inside is more personal. Try switching their position.
Back away and get more of the product into the photo, also increase the DOF, it looks like the texture of the product is very important to it's appeal.
The second has similar placement problems, the box is a much better background.
Good start, show us if you try any changes.
PETERSYMES
14th of February 2008 (Thu), 21:16
Thanks Guys
These are 2 from around 30 taken and i am not happy with the DOF in most of them despite the amount of time i spent with my finger on the DOF preview button.
Understand the comments re more cards in shot, however these are header pictures for each web page in the range, they will be accompanied with several other shots showing each card in the range in full.
Ho Hum better get the lighting gear out again.... Thanks again for the support, appreciate it.
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