2 Lodo Graffiti shots. C&C Please.

[lmulderi]

I was downtown searching out some graffiti shots the other day and came up with these two. What do you think? Please comment on composition, PP, etc. Thanks in advance guys. Shot with the nifty fifty and kit lens, respectively.

[Mike-DT6]

I like the contrast and the colours with the post processing. I like the composition of the second one. The position of the pole in the first one would be better if it was placed off-centre. :-)

Mike

[lmulderi]

Thanks for your comment. I agree about the pole. Might have to go reshoot that one.

[ooo]

Love the post processing. I love the second shot. I don't really like that circle effect / border you placed on the first one and I agree its too centered. Maybe use the house in the background to balance it out.

[crayfish13]

I like the centeredness of the first shot, I think it just makes the shot stronger. Nice pp on both.