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bishop13
20th of February 2008 (Wed), 01:49
Ruin behind the Kelso Depot in Mojave. Shot in b&w on the XTi and a bit of contrast tweaking in PS7. Thoughts?

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/3212/chimneyss7.jpg
strmrdr
20th of February 2008 (Wed), 02:18
too much negative space at the top otherwise I like it a lot.
willy b
20th of February 2008 (Wed), 03:10
Seems a little oof or soft. Good idea though, maybe try and get more of an angle, so you can actually see what is there!
bishop13
20th of February 2008 (Wed), 03:23
Seems a little oof or soft.


You know, I just noticed that when I did a tighter crop. Odd...I should check my lens to see if its not focusing correctly. Here's the tighter crop and another angle (in color).

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/7254/chimney2ub7.jpg

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/3407/chimney3sl0.jpg
willy b
20th of February 2008 (Wed), 06:18
i quite like the colour version. but again i feel them to be a little soft!
SilverHCIC
20th of February 2008 (Wed), 13:18
I think I would prefer to see the BW version straightened a bit with the contrast bumbed slightly and sharpened.