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Bucster
20th of February 2008 (Wed), 21:15
I am interested in what you think. I know the font for the "TPD photo" is large and brash but I am a Tulsa Police Officer and it is similar to what the department uses. I am proud to be a police officer and I like being associated with the department. That's why my website lacks originality TPD (Tulsa Photographic Design) could easily be TPD (Tulsa Police Department), lol :D

http://TPDphoto.smugmug.com/photos/256992772_c2L3z-L.jpg

auroraskye
20th of February 2008 (Wed), 21:47
I honestly think it is really busy, and at business card size, you will not be able to see any detail at all in those photos. I understand the urge to have your photos on the card, but if you ARE going to do that, stick with a couple of them. It's best to keep it simple.

TroyRaymond
20th of February 2008 (Wed), 22:37
I'd say move your name and Tulsa Photographic Design down a little, one row of 4 or 5 photos (larger) and the "TPD Photo" above the photos 'shorter and fatter', that font will look good with that method.

My cards are full color front, grayscale back. I have a few photos and the business name on the front and all the information on the back. Keeps it uncluttered. www.printfirm.com (http://www.printfirm.com) is where I usually order.

Troy

slappy sam
21st of February 2008 (Thu), 14:48
I'd say move your name and Tulsa Photographic Design down a little, one row of 4 or 5 photos (larger) and the "TPD Photo" above the photos 'shorter and fatter', that font will look good with that method.

My cards are full color front, grayscale back. I have a few photos and the business name on the front and all the information on the back. Keeps it uncluttered. www.printfirm.com (http://www.printfirm.com) is where I usually order.

Troy

I was going to say pretty much exactly the same. Move that stuff down a bit (the text), its spaced out quite a lot whereas the top is cluttered. I would go with 3 images, and use your little border thingies, I like em. Put em alternating diagonally, kinda stacked on top of each other, and I think you got a winner.