B&W Shayna's big day

[SQuiP]

I've only just started taking some wedding snaps. These are two of my personal favorites of the last wedding I took. I know his face is a bit dark in the first and her hair obstructs her face in the second, but especially with the second photo I think it adds something... I could be wrong? I was the only one to really like this photo of her, haha.
I realise one can only use a very limited amount of "obscure" photos like these, but i believe it could add to the mood if used sparingly. Any tips on a few mood pics?

Sorry guys, the photos dissappeared for a while...

[viet]

Good concept, but try to shoot at different (higher) angle. Low-down is never flattering for large bride, also a bit more pop to your B&W conversion might make it a bit more interesting. Just my $.2