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Anders Östberg
22nd of October 2004 (Fri), 15:05
Took this picture a rainy day and tweaked the featureless sky a bit to get a more ominous look, do you like it? Do you think I should crop the foreground?

Any comment welcome!

http://www.andersostberg.com/fotogalleri/albums/userpics/Landscapes/Graveyard_JH5Q7862.jpg

JCK
22nd of October 2004 (Fri), 15:34
yes.

JCK
22nd of October 2004 (Fri), 15:34
yes.

Anders Östberg
22nd of October 2004 (Fri), 16:22
This better, or worse?

http://www.andersostberg.com/fotogalleri/albums/userpics/Landscapes/GraveyardPano_JH5Q7862.jpg

JCK
22nd of October 2004 (Fri), 17:09
I like it much better!

Anders Östberg
23rd of October 2004 (Sat), 04:32
Thanks JCK!

Anyone else?

izzypizzy
23rd of October 2004 (Sat), 06:03
i like it better with the crop too, cool photo, i'd like to shoot a graveyard one day:)

Big_B
30th of October 2004 (Sat), 05:38
Cool colours and great sky. I think I prefer the crop, but its a close run thing. Nice work!

Elbee19
30th of October 2004 (Sat), 06:01
I like the uncropped version. The leaf-covered road that leaves the photo in the bottom right corner but is picked back up in the bottom of the photo adds to it I think.

Either one works though. Thanks for sharing!

Scottes
30th of October 2004 (Sat), 08:58
I think the uncropped version looks better in the sense that it follows the rules and is a better composition. However, to heck with the rules. The cropped version still has very good composition and looks better since it has a lot more mood and less clutter that's not pertinent to the scene or mood.

So I like the second shot much better.

Anders Östberg
30th of October 2004 (Sat), 09:53
Thanks everyone, for your comments!

I personally think I like the original version, it feels more open whereas the cropped version feels a bit "boxed-in" to me. They both work though and maybe I wouldn't have felt this way about the cropped version if I hadn't already seen the first version.

retro
2nd of November 2004 (Tue), 22:26
It's funny I was going to suggest that crop and then I read the next post. I think with the crop it gives the feel that the graveyard goes on forever and the mist adds to that.