Portrait - Fill-Flash

[msurdin]

Critique welcomed - working on exposure and skin softening (without looking unnatural or overdone). Thanks.

[swjim]

The exposure and skin look good to me, but I think your WB needs to be adjusted.

[msurdin]

Any better?

[cdifoto]

On my monitor the softening seems to have given the appearance of being out of focus, especially at the eyes.

[msurdin]

Sharpened eyes ...