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FSTOPMIAMI
24th of March 2008 (Mon), 19:55
New Camera Old Location

A few shots from Bimini

C&C Welcomed.

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http://aycu28.webshots.com/image/49907/2002567530514261935_rs.jpg

http://aycu06.webshots.com/image/49685/2002558297226186193_rs.jpg

vpnd
25th of March 2008 (Tue), 03:59
i like the color in 2

SwingBopper
25th of March 2008 (Tue), 04:39
Nice composition in #1. You might play around with increasing contrast/saturation in the sky to add some punch there.

ADAPTE
25th of March 2008 (Tue), 15:21
Like the color in #2, maybe a closer shot... #1 has a better composition, but the light is a little flat.

Grissi
25th of March 2008 (Tue), 16:50
I really like the first one. Beautiful. Dont find the subject of the second as interesting though.

Gary Lindquist
25th of March 2008 (Tue), 16:58
I like both of these images, but IMHO they can be improved.

The first image has two flaws that I can see. The first is the white area along the bottom, right corner that can easily be cropped out, or stamped if you like the size as is. The second flaw is the squarish item right behind the tree trunk. This item can be stamped out as well but is a bit more difficult, but not too difficult.

The second image could afford a sliver of a crop along the right edge where we see a light aqua line vertically in the bottom corner. Not a big deal, but we want perfection in our work, right?!? You may also want to review the debris in a critical way to see if the image would be better without some of the stuff in the foreground. Not too difficult to use the stamp tool to remove.

I would have reworked these for you but you have not set to allow editing.

ghosh
25th of March 2008 (Tue), 17:11
I like the first one because of the activity which is going on... nice.

FSTOPMIAMI
1st of April 2008 (Tue), 06:58
A few more


http://aycu20.webshots.com/image/48859/2001148714226966367_rs.jpg

http://aycu02.webshots.com/image/50281/2001143272625565797_rs.jpg

bbulldog
1st of April 2008 (Tue), 11:07
The images are good, the only thing i dont like is the borders, well the shadow in that light blueish colour, its distracting.