Young dancer

[jgbeam]

http://www.imagevenue.com/loc1/6e11c_IMG_0847web.jpg

Her mother loves the shot, but I see some room for improvement. What do you think?

Jim

[Scottes]

She looks like she's straining to turn so much. Having her more relaxed would probably look better. Other than that I would soften it a bit, or perhaps not sharpen it so much.

[Shines4U]

I agree with the softening... skin tones look a little harsh. Other than that... good color with a pretty little girl.