A second sunrise attempt

[thos01]

This is the same morning but a differtent view. Is it still too centered?

http://www.pbase.com/thos01/image/36234953.jpg :?:

[Radtech1]

It breaks all the rules and I like it.

My first thought was that it is not level. Within about 3 femtoseconds I realized that I like it that way. I suppose that the reason is that the water comes all the way to the bottom of the frame - no beach, etc - and as a result I feel just a bit as though I were on a boat viewing the scene.

Looks longer...

Looks longer...

Looks longer...

Looks longer...

Yep, the longer I look the more I find myself leaning to the right in an effort to stay upright.

Otherwise, even though the horizon bisects the frame, the hut keep the 1/3 rule going. Colors are muted, but so what, it is morning and that is how it is supposed to be. I was going to say get rid of the spot in the upper left, but I found that to be my monitor so never mind.

I like it,

Well done.

Rad

[rickc]

A very comforting picture. I like it.
rich..

[onefastvr6]

I like it quite a bit but I would have loved to have seen a couple out in the pavilion.

[thos01]

Thanks for the comments. The resort where this is located gives massages in the afternoons. I would like to see that on the pier, but at 6 am none of those party people are up. I stayed down the beach and you could hear this place cranking up at about 11 pm.