first band group shots

[jesselee]

hello. all comments welcome... be as harsh as you want. We had like ten minutes to do this. it was before their show. This is taken in the chicago area.

here are three. I'll link the rest. Which ones should i use? Also, if you look at the other picture... the sky is like totally gone, that's bad to give them right? Who knows, they might use it for a flyer? I don't know. Thanks for looking at them, here is the flickr gallery:

http://flickr.com/photos/jesseleetakes/sets/72157604310821181/

1.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2420/2372633411_3bfd6d4b97_o.jpg
2.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2162/2372627885_5a1620a939_o.jpg
3.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3188/2373467150_4b9545036b_o.jpg

[Daddy]

1 a little to blown out too much space @ the bottom.
2 he's missing the side of his arm & it's a little OOF.
they need more facial expression but I like the style of the shots & the location. good job for 10min.

[jesselee]

i didnt even see his arm cut off. haha quick shoot/ quick edit. i eventually re shot with these guys and was a little more pleased. thanks!

[Daddy]

may I see a couple from the new shoot!

[René Damkot]

Last one is OoF, and quite a bit (focus on BG). Bin that one.
Apart from that; #2 is nice. Maybe loose a few keys next time ;)

[RuthNaomi]

Really diggin' your site