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onefastvr6
12th of November 2004 (Fri), 07:21
A buddy of mine made it on to The Rebel Billionaire and he needed some shots. I think the following shot worked out best but I need some critique to make sure I get better not worse Thanks in Advance!

http://gabrielbaldinucci.com/headshots/IMG_6463b.jpg

Radtech1
12th of November 2004 (Fri), 07:35
I am not a portrait shooter - any people shots I do are shots of oppertunity - so I will not comment on pose, etc. That is better left to those who are more skilled/knowlegable.

But, as far as the photograph goes, I would clone out the tire scuff on the wall below his left foot. I would get rid of the branch on the left frame - the one level with his elbow, and maybe even the one below that too. And definately the two little branchy things to our right of his left ankle.

Rad

onefastvr6
12th of November 2004 (Fri), 07:41
Done! Thank you!