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adam*
3rd of April 2008 (Thu), 20:08
Jack Penate, Newcastle Student Union. 4th March, 08. Finally got round to editing these!
Full gallery at: http://www.pbase.com/adamgrayphotography/jack_penate
Comments & Critique very much appreciated.
#1
http://www.pbase.com/adamgrayphotography/image/95111983.jpg
#2
http://www.pbase.com/adamgrayphotography/image/95112007.jpg
#3
http://www.pbase.com/adamgrayphotography/image/95112022.jpg
#4
http://www.pbase.com/adamgrayphotography/image/95111982.jpg
#5
http://www.pbase.com/adamgrayphotography/image/95112003.jpg
#6
http://www.pbase.com/adamgrayphotography/image/95112031.jpg
#7
http://www.pbase.com/adamgrayphotography/image/95112016.jpg
adam*
4th of April 2008 (Fri), 14:21
Not even any critique?
bacchanal
4th of April 2008 (Fri), 14:36
I saw these earlier and I think they're pretty great. Unfortunately I'm on my work monitor (which is horrible), so I don't usually comment until I get home. I think #1 could maybe use a little more contrast. The expressions are nice for the most part (well, #6 is a little weird). Focus, composition, exposure are all quite solid, and if you've got those down you're doing pretty well.
I've really been diggin' the stuff that you've been posting lately.
adam*
5th of April 2008 (Sat), 06:18
I saw these earlier and I think they're pretty great. Unfortunately I'm on my work monitor (which is horrible), so I don't usually comment until I get home. I think #1 could maybe use a little more contrast. The expressions are nice for the most part (well, #6 is a little weird). Focus, composition, exposure are all quite solid, and if you've got those down you're doing pretty well.
I've really been diggin' the stuff that you've been posting lately.
Thanks alot. #6 is slightly weird I guess but I had quite alot of normal style ones and i'm trying to push the ones that are a bit more expressive. On my laptop (not the greatest although calibrated) it looks about right but here's an edit with a little more contrast:
René Damkot
5th of April 2008 (Sat), 07:32
In #2 the mic is in the way.
Other than that; nice images.
adam*
5th of April 2008 (Sat), 12:44
In #2 the mic is in the way.
Other than that; nice images.
Thanks Rene, unfortunately I couldn't move at that point so it was pretty inescapable. I think we'd all love it if artists stopped using microphones :)
Paul Tinworth
5th of April 2008 (Sat), 14:41
Another brilliant series, Adam! :)
adam*
6th of April 2008 (Sun), 07:24
Another brilliant series, Adam! :)
Cheers Paul!
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