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aquafocus
6th of April 2008 (Sun), 17:23
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y113/simonf1978/28dayslater.jpg
First attempt so please don't hold back.
ogre1231
6th of April 2008 (Sun), 18:57
I hear crickets in the streets
SQuiP
7th of April 2008 (Mon), 05:25
I like it, but I'd straighten it a bit and maybe crop the sides.... You can also make a few small curve adjustments to make it pop. I'm not exactly a PP wizard, but I think it might work :-)
dsul413
7th of April 2008 (Mon), 07:49
Straightening the photo would help a lot.
NewattheGame
8th of April 2008 (Tue), 02:16
A little rotation clockwise would help but it looks like a faithful reproduction, the street would be a bit dark under that lighting. Does it lack a point of focus?
blighty
8th of April 2008 (Tue), 10:06
Where is that please? I'm location scouting for a film and that looks very interesting.
tiziano
8th of April 2008 (Tue), 16:56
It lacks contrast, and I would crop out both sides, the garbage on the left and the dark wall on the right. Plus, the rotation.
Edit: I forgot: I don't understand the title.
aquafocus
8th of April 2008 (Tue), 17:57
Thanks for the comments folks.
I've taken your suggestions on board and come up with this:
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y113/simonf1978/28dayslaterafteradvice.jpg
The shot is from an alley near Gt Russell Street tube station in London and the title refers to an English film along the same lines as 'I Am Legend'.
Personally, I prefer the 'darkness' of the original shot including the light and rotation but any further comments are appreciated.
Copilot
9th of April 2008 (Wed), 00:24
I really want to move to europe to see streets like these.
tiziano
9th of April 2008 (Wed), 04:25
I really want to move to europe to see streets like these.
One thing is seeing, another thing is driving... Expecially if you are on a motorcycle, and it's a rainy day...:)
Come to Italy and they are all like that!
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