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Dave_PM
6th of April 2008 (Sun), 23:07
http://triumphtalk.smugmug.com/photos/254444915_6s8id-L.jpg

http://triumphtalk.smugmug.com/photos/254445292_FWuZ6-L.jpg

http://triumphtalk.smugmug.com/photos/254446347_6zbR2-L.jpg

http://triumphtalk.smugmug.com/photos/254445977_RSHP9-L.jpg

Stocky
7th of April 2008 (Mon), 03:58
Those are some beautiful artists, but I would prefer a looser crop so that we can see what they are working on. You might consider a wider variety of angles as well. I see the same picture with 4 different people in it; you might consider taking some at a lower angle so that we can see their face, or maybe a shot over the artist's shoulder looking at the pastels from their point of view.

Dave_PM
7th of April 2008 (Mon), 05:11
Thanks for the feedback. Would something like this work better ?

http://triumphtalk.smugmug.com/photos/254444275_nAY9C-L.jpg

http://triumphtalk.smugmug.com/photos/254445608_AWFp4-L.jpg

http://triumphtalk.smugmug.com/photos/254446502_9E9XF-L.jpg

http://triumphtalk.smugmug.com/photos/254444254_JYX6F-L.jpg

Stocky
7th of April 2008 (Mon), 07:31
Lighting is hard in a situation like that. Your first picture looks underexposed while the second looks over exposed. I would also have liked to see a wider angle. You seem to have quite a set from that location.

LeuceDeuce
7th of April 2008 (Mon), 11:44
I agree the crops are too tight. To me this is a series of images of women, not street art.

That's not a complaint either ;)

Dave_PM
8th of April 2008 (Tue), 07:44
The biggest problem I encountered when doing these were the people standing around. I tried to cut them out as much as I could. Or do you think it would have been better having them in. I did get shots of the artwork alone as well here are a few.

http://triumphtalk.smugmug.com/photos/254444594_ZHhEp-M.jpg

http://triumphtalk.smugmug.com/photos/254444964_zW3BQ-M.jpg

http://triumphtalk.smugmug.com/photos/254445771_65hFY-M-1.jpg

http://triumphtalk.smugmug.com/photos/254446460_wzVwJ-M.jpg