My 1st e-shoot, before Philco's Post - C&C Welcomed

[Aaagogo]

This one took place about one month ago, I didn't really like them, was a test shoot for one of the local wedding photographer that I'm going to work for. Was scratching my head thinking how to improve, then Philco posted his awesome how-to thread.

I didn't quite like any of the images that I shot that day, but she liked them... so i guess that's more important.

I shot another one this past weekend, and it turned out so much better. Will post those soon.

they were randomly edited by me,

1.)
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/5650/tc38jd2.jpg

2.)
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/5255/tc92hj4.jpg

3.)
http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/3460/tc95gu1.jpg

4.)
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/535/tc169pg0.jpg

[Aaagogo]

5.)
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/5640/tc250mn5.jpg

6.)
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/3457/tc199qn7.jpg

7.)
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/8690/tc242mp4.jpg

8.)
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/793/tc276jj8.jpg

[cjimenez]

#8, and #2 my favorite!

[The_Duke_Of_Eli]

I think #6 would benefit from a slightly narrower crop to take out the gap between their two legs respectively. Apart from that it's pretty well done.

[auroraskye]

Honestly, it doesn't look like the shots themselves are that bad but I have to tell you, I think the editing is a killer on most of them.

They are all pretty cool/blue except #6. There are also some exposure issues. The diffuse glow on #5 is bad. Hehe. Sorry, had to be honest. #6 is probably my favorite.

:)

[moeronn]

I think the shots and poses are generally good. Maybe a bit (less?) PP might improve them. Really like #6.

[DwightMcCann]

Not a single crisp clear shot of the two of their faces?

[Pomona2006]

Maybe it's my monitor, but of the first batch, her hand looks different in #1 compared to 2, 3, & 4. I personally like 2 & 4 from the first batch.

[Aaagogo]

I have their faces, but I felt that I did such a poor job, so I didn't post any up:confused:

Not a single crisp clear shot of the two of their faces?

I think I know what you mean, I processed them a little different, so the skin on the hand looks different. Maybe that's why.

Totally new to PP'ing e-shoots

Maybe it's my monitor, but of the first batch, her hand looks different in #1 compared to 2, 3, & 4. I personally like 2 & 4 from the first batch.

[nvrl8]

5 & 6 are sooooo awesome. Love the composition!! Really, those two pictures are just great.