My first OOB attempt...

[Trauma]

CC welcome.

[tonydee]

Compositionally I think it's ok, and the reflection's good, but she looks a distinctly overexposed in areas (particularly the dress around the torso), somewhat orange of skin, and a little flat and obviously pasted-in. Having your name right over the grye/white/black divide doesn't work too well for me either... something much more discrete on a flatter background would seem a good idea. Cheers, Tony

[Trauma]

TY. I agree 100% w/ the lighting comments. Taken during a dress rehearsal and the light people were playing w/ different light levels. Also, seems the lighting "director" had this thing for the yellow gelled lights...kept saying they gave the same look as lights w/ no gels and added red w/ them. The result was not too flattering in pics or real time.

:)

[Robert_Lay]

Pretty neat!

I like it, but it looks like something you wouldn't want as a steady diet.

I also agree with the comments from tonydee.