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J. Cobble
22nd of November 2004 (Mon), 14:10
Took this of a client, one of the guys in the middle. I was really pleased with the shot. I would a critic.

http://www.bytegallery.com/data/3112/53Triathlon.jpg

Thanks

izzypizzy
22nd of November 2004 (Mon), 14:45
I wouldn't think a shot like this would be so surreal=) They look like zombie/robots, it's a cool pic!

iowahawkeye6
24th of November 2004 (Wed), 21:52
Really well photographed. My 2ยข would be that you should try to crop it so that the heads of the men are either in or out. You could cut them off above the eyes but cropping at the nose makes it look peculiar. Picky I know. :D

slimjim
25th of November 2004 (Thu), 11:30
I like it the way it is.. really shows the action and the energy going around

edsarkiss
29th of November 2004 (Mon), 13:41
fantastic!

my only suggestion would be to lighten it a bit or increase the contrast (unless the underexposure was intentional). seems that there is some headroom at the lighter end of the scale that is untapped.