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Aaagogo
18th of April 2008 (Fri), 00:38
I did my 1st round sometime in March and I posted them up for feedback, after receiving the feedbacks, I did some changes, but I forgot to post them up for re-critiquing, then I went on to post the golf collages and said that I followed the style of my basketball collages. (the 1st revision were portrait orientated) Apologies for the confusion.

1.)
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/121/tylerdebordposterqo8.jpg

2.)
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/8880/denvercobbpostergj4.jpg

3.) Colored border images option.
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/2994/williambenjaminposterja2.jpg

khall
18th of April 2008 (Fri), 22:03
I think you have gone over board with the amount of players in each of them.
Plus your watermark adds to the confusion.

jpyeast
18th of April 2008 (Fri), 22:10
I like the layout, but I have to agree they seem a little busy. Looks like some great shots though.

MJPhotos24
19th of April 2008 (Sat), 13:13
The 4 main side pics and the two middle would probably be ok alone, the other ones really clutter it up. MAYBE one big one in the middle of the middle two (kind of seperating them) but not sure, 6 main might be the limit to not make there eyes explode when looking at it.

drstat
24th of January 2009 (Sat), 10:42
I like how did you create the middle set up. very neat i would like to do one of these.

Aaagogo
24th of January 2009 (Sat), 13:59
how did this come back from the dead?