Photo Composition

[Mitchkitter]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v64/MitchK/Equalityweb.jpg
I NEED YOU, to critique my image, and help me get an A!

My teacher for world goverment asked us to create a composition using any medium, I chose photography <duh>.

Honostly the pictures don't seem to mesh well, all origional pictures. Any tips / critiques welcome, the more negative the better.

[jacob]

Maybe push them closer together or drop the text. Avoide un even white spaces. Besides that looks good.

[Radtech1]

How much more time to you have?

For the Coloreds a much more effective selection would have been the Civil Rights protesters being firehosed. (are you limitied to only photos YOU shot, or, can you use "stock photos"?)

I do not understand the context of the stream for the Judewasser. To my knowlege of history there was no drownings of Jews...so what does this mean?

And for the "Upper Class", I would have chosed San Pelegrino instead, as Dasani is a Coca-Cola product and found at every 7-11 on the face of the earth. Hardly "Upper Class"

Good Idea, I wish there were a clearer execution.

Rad

[Mitchkitter]

Thanks for the comments.
The intention is to use all of my own photo's, maybe I can convince some of my friends for a little november water fight :P <Alaska>

Arround concentration camps, the jewish people were given very little water, so to stay alive, many of then were forced to leave their shacks at night, to drink from a river, and get back before the guards noticed, the ****'s didn't want the jewish to drink the water for fear of "contaminating the supreme race" it was quite an intresting and odd phobia.

Great idea about the water, I'll have to go "specialty water shopping" today.

As for the spacing, The composition needs to fill a 8X10

Thanks for the comments