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jacob
27th of November 2004 (Sat), 13:22
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Radtech1
27th of November 2004 (Sat), 16:04
Sorry Jacob,

This one does very little for me. I think that the problem that I have is with the difficulty in seeing the darts. You have a set of several identically looking things, tightly collected. The focus is just a little soft, and the colors have been flattened. The background (the board) is also very active - and not really providing a homogenious contrast to the darts. All taken, it makes it a shot that is not easy on the eyes.

Unfortunately, I have NO idea how to correct this. Perhaps to partially de-saturate the background and sharpen and brighten the darts. Just a thought.

On an unrelated note, when I figured out what I was looking at all that I could think of was the scene in Young Frankenstien where Kenny Mars slams a fistfull of darts into the bull's eye and then runs back and makes several "fffffFFFTT! fffffFFFTT! fffffFFFTT! fffffFFFTT! fffffFFFTT!" noises with his mouth. Gene Wilder turns around and sees the "result", spits out his wine and says "Nice Grouping".

Once I had that in my mind, well...

Rad