View Full Version : Please tell me what you think - WARNING Nudity
kc9cdq
27th of November 2004 (Sat), 21:56
Please take a look and give me your thoughts.... Thanks
Shot on Canon 10D w/ Tamron 28-70 f/2.8 XR Di.
Shutter: 1/4
Aperture: f/2.8
Cropping and blemish touch up in Photoshop.
Keith
http://mysite.verizon.net/res1h6el/CRW_3138_RT16-small.jpg
Meerkat17
28th of November 2004 (Sun), 04:27
The image does nothing to capture my imagination.
The lighting is nice but I feel that the model should have been looking down at the flame not at the camera, perhaps the the candle which she is holding could have been further into the corner of the frame to help give it more balance.
Just my opinion
David
Red
28th of November 2004 (Sun), 05:10
I agree. I think I'd also be tempted to use a white softbox off camera, slow down the exposure time, so that the candle seems to give off a whiter light, but is in fact the light off camera
Just an idea
JCK
28th of November 2004 (Sun), 05:35
It is a good idea. However, as you have probably figured by now, if the only source of light comes from below the face of the subject, you will get a scary, halloweenish efect on facial features.
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