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00silvergt
4th of May 2008 (Sun), 13:16
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v80/00silvergt/megsoptimus1.jpg
Thanks for looking. C&C are welcomed and appreciated.
clickcanon40
4th of May 2008 (Sun), 21:57
Well :lol: I am bored and taking a break from studying for a test. So I am in critique mode! That said, here are my honest thoughts and observations.
1) The "MORE THAN MEETS THE EYE" Looks like "MORE THAN MEETS THF EYE" due to the world covering up the bottom of the E. Personally, I think it would be better if earth wasent even there.
2) The lights on both Megatron and Optimus Prime look very awkward. Maybe just use a soft and slightly transparent brush tool to make the glow effect.
3) I have too be honest, it looks like they are about to have "ARM WARS" Maybe if there arms didn't look so close or so ready to hit it would help.
4) Not necessarily a bad thing, but Transformers is not a standout line of Text. Now I say not necassarily a bad thing because if you dont want that to be your center of intest as far as text then it is fine the way it is. It is just very dark compared to the other text.
5) Maybe edit out that small blip of Megatron that comes up on the left-top corner.
Otherwise this is great. Hope you dont feel like I picked it apart, I wouldent take time to crit if I didnt think it had some potential so please dont take it hard. Believe it or not, I do like it alot :lol: :o
00silvergt
4th of May 2008 (Sun), 23:13
Take it hard? Never, thanks for looking! We all have our opinions. Thanks, again!
00silvergt
5th of May 2008 (Mon), 03:08
Here's another from the set I just finished editing/composing:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v80/00silvergt/megsoptimus2bubble2.jpg
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