Autumnal Abstracts - C & C welcomed

[amandajane]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2365/2491255528_f30c24a9a2_o.jpg


http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2370/2490409463_8b752cee5a_o.jpg


http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2418/2491226332_665df80ec9_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2348/2490410445_616838776f_o.jpg

Any thoughts anyone? I'm still learning and love the shallow dof I am getting with my 100mm and full set of tubes.

Photographed indoors under my studio light with diffuser. I'm particularly interested in thoughts on composition as I know I need to work on it :0)

Thank you!

[Ook]

I really like the colour in all of these. As an abstract, the composition in #3 works best for me personally (the others look more like very nice shallow-DOF leaves than abstracts).

The lighting is all really great, though given studio conditions perhaps the blowout in the LHS of #3 could be avoided, unless it's intentional.

Good work all around!

[amandajane]

Thank you for your feedback :0)

I hadn't noticed that the blown out part was so bright, it's definately something I need to look out for.

The background colour is due to a painted art canvas I've prepared. It works quite well when the subject is far enough in front of it.

Thanks again!