Please Critique.. 1 photo

[mr.photoguy]

Taken at Orchard Beach.
The sun already went down and I wanted to try taking some photo's of the water fountain with the light right above it. I liked the color of the light also, so it caught my attention. Then I noticed all of the lights that ran all the way down the boardwalk. I wish I had someone walking down the boardwalk, but noone was walking down that night.

Anyhow, Your thoughts or comments are appreciated..
The lens is an older Canon 28-80 usm, so it is not the sharpest.

http://www.pbase.com/brucescott/image/37518529

[sameerb]

Colors look good in the snap but following are few things i didn't like about the photo :

1) The cement block at the bottom of the picture is little distracting

2) Image looks little tilted (left)
3) There is some white line on the sky

[chops]

Looks good, but I would have cloned out that UFO in the sky. ;-)

[mr.photoguy]

That line was either a plane or a shooting star. It may have been a plane though.
The image may be tilted.. I have some sort of issue, with keeping my kneck straight. I am working on that.

I only sharpened it(USM), resized it, added some contrast.

Thank you for the comments. Keep them coming.

[Wazza]

You have some nice photos, but this one in particular, I don't like too much. Possibly it's just the noticeable tilt. 1.5 or 2 degrees is needed. :)

And yes, the light trail from aircraft is distracting, as it's rather short. Perhaps if it filled up more of the sky, it would be worth keeping in there.