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IIIMik3
15th of December 2004 (Wed), 20:24
Here's a shot I took for my Studio Lighting Class, let me know what you guys think. Thanks in advance!
http://members.roadfly.org/iiimik3/candles01.jpg
Charles Michael Ballestamon
cmM
15th of December 2004 (Wed), 20:31
very nice setup, nice idea for a shot.
A couple things I'd have done different: more space on the top, and more space to the right of the picture. (but that's just me )
btw, HTML code does not work here. use [img] tags instead
Meerkat17
16th of December 2004 (Thu), 21:00
I've looked at this several times now...
I feel the subject is too central and too high, it might have worked better for me if the subject had been kneeling in the first group of lights looking at a candle. It would also have been nice to see more of her face and the light play upon it.
Otherwise, I like the idea.
Regards
David
sameerb
17th of December 2004 (Fri), 00:20
setup is great
but space is left corner is little more
and yes you should have taken this from such a angel where subject face and light effects on it are visible or simply let her tie her hair
im2postal
18th of December 2004 (Sat), 11:26
Good composition except for the space behind the subject's back. Might have been better to crop so subject is in the first third of shot.
Robbie
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