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JohnS1IS
22nd of December 2004 (Wed), 12:27
Heres my Dog, what could I do to make this photo better?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v441/martensj42/buddydog1.jpg

Meerkat17
22nd of December 2004 (Wed), 12:39
First of all welcome to the Forum

Now for the dog - what I want to see is the dog's features, it's eyes, nose, etc. Your focus is just before the dog's face which puts the dog in "soft focus" also the highlights are burned-out coming from the light source's you have used which are to each side you really need something in front to light up his face and eyes. A bounced flash would have helped.

What are the camera and settings you used?

Regards
David

JohnS1IS
22nd of December 2004 (Wed), 13:16
is this one better than the first one???



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v441/martensj42/my%20photography/other004.jpg

Meerkat17
22nd of December 2004 (Wed), 13:29
John,
Have a look at these it might give you some idea of what the viewer wants to see when looking at pet portraits.


http://davidlewins.fotopic.net/p6177756.html
http://davidlewins.fotopic.net/p6439558.html
http://davidlewins.fotopic.net/p6177753.html