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Sagar
25th of December 2004 (Sat), 12:05
Open for critiqes and comments :)

http://www.pbase.com/sagar/image/37852266.jpg

Rob Beltman
25th of December 2004 (Sat), 12:13
Nice looking shot, that in my opinion could have been bettrer if;

- you had oriented the camera to create a straight horizon, it' slightly tilted now.
Reading this image I just get a slight feeling that the building is falling over backward due to a
crooked horizon.

- you had chosen a lower stance.
The sky is unfortunately not that interesting in this picture. You could either make it a bit more dramatic using curves or contrast, but it probably never merited 50 percent of your image. That could have been used for the nice structure of the square, then leading the readers eye up to the couple and eventually the building.

Well, that' my thoughts...feel free to disagree!

c0ntr0lz
25th of December 2004 (Sat), 19:01
i think it may have been a better shot if it were in a landscape frame.
was it too busy on the sides of this shot to get a good landscape shot?
it'd be awesome if you could edit out everyone else besides the 2 in the corner.
they look like little kids.
nice work