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ghosh
11th of June 2008 (Wed), 14:38
Hi,
I am just back from field trip.. cant wait to get C&C on this. Composition, color or just hi will be appreciated.

Thank you.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3092/2570496253_bd4a832768_o.jpg

Robert_Lay
11th of June 2008 (Wed), 16:37
Background is too dull and colorless.

ghosh
11th of June 2008 (Wed), 16:38
Okie. thanks. I think i need to revert back to original one.

midnitejam
11th of June 2008 (Wed), 20:42
Actually, I think the image is too small for me to be critical. The flower seems to be a little soft. I like how the background completely isolates the subject.

I think you could improve the shot with a stronger modeling effect from your light source (or PP).

Robert_Lay
11th of June 2008 (Wed), 21:48
Actually, I think the image is too small for me to be critical. The flower seems to be a little soft. I like how the background completely isolates the subject.

I think you could improve the shot with a stronger modeling effect from your light source (or PP).

That last bit about stronger modeling - very good. I finally figured out what's wrong with the blossom. It needs to be at more of an angle, rather than head on, because it would then become more 3-dimensional.

midnitejam
12th of June 2008 (Thu), 08:19
That last bit about stronger modeling - very good. I finally figured out what's wrong with the blossom. It needs to be at more of an angle, rather than head on, because it would then become more 3-dimensional.

Bob, you and I agree on almost everything--but you say it better.

ADAPTE
12th of June 2008 (Thu), 15:17
I would have used more DOF until i got the little twig sharp... but i like the colors and the contrast of happy and gloom.

Flo
12th of June 2008 (Thu), 15:22
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v299/emmaloudawg/2570496253_bd4a832768_o.jpg

You know me, I like dark BG.s:o

ghosh
12th of June 2008 (Thu), 16:04
well, actually if you just do auto levels in the original you get some thing like flo did..

Thanks Flo.. for working on it.

Flo
13th of June 2008 (Fri), 00:02
You know I am the furthest thing from a techie.I never say anything more....:oops: Just I like black BG's for a flower like a daisy.:o

midnitejam
13th of June 2008 (Fri), 11:02
I prefer black backgrounds for flowers. I like most solid-color backgrounds for flowers. I also adore vignette fades where the flower/s fade into a blend with the background. I like flower shots that are fully sat'd as well. Sometimes I even like'em borderline over sat'd.