Train to where?

[RSebaF]

Had a little experiment done during the hour this week when it DIDNT rain. C&C as always welcome
http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs26/i/2008/164/3/0/Train_to_the_unknown_by_Rsebaf.jpg

[lbcyalater]

It looks a bit under exsposed and maybe a bit flat (should be fixable if you shot in raw) but I really like the shot, it has a suttle creepyness to it with the hand.

[airfrogusmc]

An obvious burn on the sky you can see the glow near the top of train. Needs to be less obvious.

[RSebaF]

how about now? made some improvements to the previous one

[lbcyalater]

well the sky doesnt look burned anymore but the over all image still looks pretty grey