Comments welcome

[jd_D60]

comments please


http://www.pbase.com/image/5483173

[Conk]

I like what you are trying to accomplish here. The photo is too bright and IMO the top needs cropping. A little more shadow would also be nice and can be achieved in Photoshop.

[henkbos]

Nice shot. Colors are not as equal as they should be. You might try to convert this to B&W to play around in PS. There are some great effects possible with this one!

[Leighow]

Well it is a very beautiful young girl, and a professional looking rendition.

I am not expert enough to know what to do differently. The white seems like the right choice, but it occupies a lot of the space. Still, I supose that it sets the girl down, and forces the viewer to drop his/her gaze down to the subject.

Looks very lovely to me. Perhaps a bit bright. A sort of jack-in-the-box ... or Mary Poppins... shot for a Broadway play. It is sort of posed, but natural.

On close -- great image.

HOWIE