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13th of June 2008 (Fri), 20:49
I took a few shots today of My sister, the bride's, shoes, and I was wondering if anyone could offer any thoughts/suggestions.
13th of June 2008 (Fri), 20:58
i really like the composition of the first one, but i wish that more of the top shoe's ankle strap was in focus.
13th of June 2008 (Fri), 21:06
yeah, i agree, need to use a narrower aperture (how do you spell that?) to get all those details in focus. also i think it could use a little more light on the subject - I do like the concept though
14th of June 2008 (Sat), 21:40
I appreciate the suggestions.
I'll try & re-shoot it tomorrow, and spare everyone the agony from showing the selective color versions of these pictures. :)
Anthony J Howe
15th of June 2008 (Sun), 03:01
The angle of the shoes is good in the first shot, this is indeed composed well.
Not sure about the angle of the shoes n the second shot but this is well compensated with a beautiful white flower next to it, well done.
15th of June 2008 (Sun), 04:28
nice concept. they just seem to be missing something to me. or at least have an empty bg. it needs something to it so it doesn't seem so empty. maybe a bouquet? or some flowers? idk. just my thoughts.
15th of June 2008 (Sun), 06:38
I like the composition of the first picture but agree with a couple others as to the top not being in focus on the shoe. If you wanted that affect - then take the same shot but from more of a distance.
15th of June 2008 (Sun), 19:23
like the first, but yeah, more DOF
16th of June 2008 (Mon), 00:55
right on the money if you ask me
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