Need advice

[gucio321]

Here it is my first shot at sort of on the spot prtrait (http://www.pbase.com/image/5631737) so any comments will be apriciated. Tell me everything that is wrong with it so I can learn for the future. Thanx

[G2Jim]

I'm no expert, but here's my two cents worth. The focus seems to be a little off (on the boys hand instead of the faces), and I think I'd recommend cropping it just a little closer to the subjects so the logs aren't quite so prominent. Otherwise it's a nice photo!

[henkbos]

Agree with Jim, although I think the focus is more important than the cropping.

[gucio321]

L guess it only makes sense since I can alwys crop it but can't really refocus it. thanks for the advice guys, and keep it comming :)