June 28th 2008 at 11:43

[CameronSmith]

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C+C Please (harsh)


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[Kaushik Balakumar]

Very interesting idea Cameron. The light is good.
But I feel there is no single (or one) point of interest in this image which could bring the eyes to rest on it. If the boy in the middle is the subject of interest then something has to be done to emphasize him in the frame. The buildings on either sides draw a lot of attention. Perhaps you could try cropping bit off right & top - but am not too sure.
Nevertheless, a well seen image.

rgds,
Kaushik

[CameronSmith]

Thank you!

[Kaushik Balakumar]

Oops, sorry - I actually meant cropping on right of the frame & top. I had typed wrongly as 'left' instead of right which I corrected now.

rgds,
Kaushik