Lost opportunity

[usingthejohn]

I called these two pictues "Lost Opportunity" because of the steps leading to a door, which is behind a locked fence.

Please critique, I'm always looking for ways to improve, JOHN

http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z114/usingthejohn/RAW%20shots/steps.jpg
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z114/usingthejohn/RAW%20shots/steps1.jpg

[lmulderi]

The composition is much better in #1, Try to straighten it and crop a little tighter perhaps? Might look good PP'd for a darker feel to it.