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OhNe0z
6th of July 2008 (Sun), 14:10
Okay, since my last thread i messed up on I'll be a bit more specific.

1
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b384/Ne0z31/IMG_5841.jpg

2
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b384/Ne0z31/IMG_5786.jpg

3
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b384/Ne0z31/Jaguar.jpg

4
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b384/Ne0z31/IMG_5495.jpg

5
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b384/Ne0z31/IMG_5587copy.jpg

6
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b384/Ne0z31/IMG_6455.jpg

7
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b384/Ne0z31/IMG_6438.jpg

8
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b384/Ne0z31/IMG_6446.jpg

regina_emmanuelle
6th of July 2008 (Sun), 14:19
I like 1-4.

5 could have benefited from a couple of stops less with maybe a boost in exposure length to soften the flow of water coming down.

I'm not too keen on the backdrop for the last set... I think it washes out the car (although that tunnel with the 'green' light would have been awesome if it was more prominent) and some of the shots are a little soft. Try some high pass and USM in Photoshop to see if it pops.

OhNe0z
6th of July 2008 (Sun), 14:23
Yeah, im dissapointed with 5 also because of the water... but my tripod broke that day :(

regina_emmanuelle
6th of July 2008 (Sun), 14:48
Yeah, im dissapointed with 5 also because of the water... but my tripod broke that day :(

Ouch... that sucks. Sorry to hear that.

Irreverent
6th of July 2008 (Sun), 15:33
#7 just seems a little underexposed and flat to me. Perhaps a little boost to show off the car's whites?

HellKat Photography
6th of July 2008 (Sun), 19:59
For #2 I would blur the white/grey car to the left to make the viewer focus more on the main car. I always seem to go straight to the focal point when I look at images and follow that point. With #3 I always use a lower angle looking up to catch more sky in the image while still including the ground. It gives the car a more dramatic feel to it. As for the rest of the images I like them very much. I think the location you chose for 6,7 and 8 are a perfect spot but would have moved the car out a little more from the wall on #8 to give a nice clean seperation.

Lonnie
7th of July 2008 (Mon), 14:11
#1 - I think I would have taken this shot to NOT include the TV screen. The building behind the fountain should have been the background IMO.

#4 - I really like this photo. I'd crop the people and building out on the right side. Digging the colors of these flowers.

#5 - You did a good job of capturing the deep browns of the wheel. I like the shot.

I'm not going to comment on the car photos, just not my cup o tea. I do like the STI - that's one of my favorite cars on Forza :)