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alone
7th of July 2008 (Mon), 14:33
Hi all,
My stepson filled me with dread when he asked if I would be the "official photographer" at his wedding. They were very pleased with the results but above all, I would like some CCs from other forum members please.

I have photoshopped some of the images but, being very new to PS, I didn't go too mad!!

1
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3178/2645946207_fb84c928f7.jpg?v=0

2
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3282/2646774796_5fdcbdca71.jpg?v=0

3
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3063/2646774244_8b7475e270.jpg?v=0

4
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3293/2646773864_0112d2033a.jpg?v=0

5
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3099/2646773546_65c25f2e23.jpg?v=0

6
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3058/2646774508_41404fbc83.jpg?v=0

All shots taken with EOS 350D and Canon 18-55 lens.
Thanks in advance for any comments.:confused:

julierenee
7th of July 2008 (Mon), 17:55
hi, good job on the pics. I know how hard weddings are, I'm just starting to do them myself.

#1 seems a little flat, maybe it is the background. try to fix the white balance and contrast. it seems like it could be cropped a little differently too.

#3 is an awesome capture, but some important parts are cropped...her other hand/boquet, dress, and his foot.

#4 is great too, love the girls laughing, but the background is lacking...would be nice if it was blurred

#6 is kinda snapshotish...do you have one that is further back w/ more of her dress/flowers? maybe black and white would help even out skin blemishes....

I'm no expert by any means....i feel i learn more when people give me some constructive criticism so i am trying to help others out too...:)

alone
7th of July 2008 (Mon), 18:50
Thanks for the comments. All very new to me the digital side of photography even more so photoshop but I do need some constructive C+Cs. Thanks again:) Unfortunately 6 was taken from the front seat of the car - and not my car - so I had to be careful getting my feet on the seats lol. I shall photo shop 6 and see what I can come up with.

DigitalSpecialist
7th of July 2008 (Mon), 19:19
I hope they like your work, you did them well!

randplaty
7th of July 2008 (Mon), 21:44
A lot of great laughs. Good job! Post some more!