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zachwsu
9th of July 2008 (Wed), 20:06
Hey all, took some engagement photos of some friends in MN this past month and would love to get some feedback, ill be shooting there wedding in Napa next year and could always use some pro critique...take care.

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FamilyJules
9th of July 2008 (Wed), 21:48
I love them all :) Great captures
kasper27f
10th of July 2008 (Thu), 00:06
i love the one with the hands in their pockets ;o) all are great!
Patsa
10th of July 2008 (Thu), 00:13
Absolutely beautiful photos!!
zachwsu
10th of July 2008 (Thu), 00:44
Thanks, I cropped the hands in pockets one down to "John Hughes" ratio.
ph0ngtran
10th of July 2008 (Thu), 01:26
really nice set. I really like #1 tfs
flashLM
10th of July 2008 (Thu), 01:26
great series, i like the creativity in #5...
zachwsu
10th of July 2008 (Thu), 02:13
muchas gracias...thanks for the comments
SuzyView
10th of July 2008 (Thu), 13:47
Wonderful series. The use of natural and old settings are great.
TheHoff
10th of July 2008 (Thu), 13:56
1. Nice capture. DoF is too shallow. Non-photographers expect both people to be sharp; especially since she is more the focus and he the sidelight.

2. I like it. Needs a horizon tilt to straighten it.

3. Meh. Wide angle gives him huge feet and the rest of the composition doesn't do much for me.

4. Great. Very natural looking without venturing into Menthol cigarette ad territory.

5. Well, yea... very 70's I guess. How about color with a old photo tint shift?

6. Nice.

7. I understand not wanting them centered but this feels unbalanced. Could probably be improved with another crop. I think the line of 1/3rds on the right side is falling between them which is distracting.
zachwsu
10th of July 2008 (Thu), 14:20
Hoff - thanks for the comments...and yes 5 was supposed to a little more 80's than 70's but non the less.

Ill take a look at number 7 and see if i can improve. I totally agree on number 1 but she looks so great in that picture that i just cant resist liking that one.