Skateboarding multimedia Slideshow - tell me what you think

[dmilo06]

So I recently finished my first audio slideshow at my internship of this skateboarding competition and i'd love some feedback since it was my first time playing around with audio. Thanks

http://www.examiner.net/multimedia/x1470905981/Blue-Springs-Skateboarding-Competition

[copr33]

The pictures are really good and I like the commentaries but I would have added some type of soundtrack (music) and then had the comments from the skaters on top of the soundtrack.

[jbergdoll]

The majority of the photos were way too tight... barely any of the obstacle being skated and a lot of cut off limbs. I love the commentary though, all of it is so true.