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silversldr
17th of July 2008 (Thu), 17:19
I just moved to Brownsville, Tx and within the week I needed to do something other then look for a house. I took off and headed towards the area encompassing the border crossing and found these interesting alleys. What do you all think?

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3076/2651061783_e11e78f62f_b.jpg

Any critiques are good critiques

***I should have titled it as first post in Urban. Sorry if there is any confusion.***

twstdcain
17th of July 2008 (Thu), 18:01
Great Photo! May I ask how you processed this?

silversldr
17th of July 2008 (Thu), 18:28
I used the nostalgic preset for Lightroom that I dl from:

http://www.lightroomkillertips.com/

DrFil
17th of July 2008 (Thu), 18:52
i like it, though there is no definitive subject to focus on. i also think it would work better if it was cropped on the bottom and just started from the big puddle.

kenyc
17th of July 2008 (Thu), 20:37
i like it, though there is no definitive subject to focus on. i also think it would work better if it was cropped on the bottom and just started from the big puddle.

Yep, I'll second that.

Great shot and processing.

silversldr
18th of July 2008 (Fri), 18:40
Thank you. I will give it a shot and see about posting the result

BottomBracket
18th of July 2008 (Fri), 21:34
Very nice, I like the high contrast here. It seems a but tilted though.

kenyc
18th of July 2008 (Fri), 21:51
Very nice, I like the high contrast here. It seems a but tilted though.


Not in the reflection. :)

Chet
18th of July 2008 (Fri), 21:53
Very nice great PP! I concur on the bottom crop.

silversldr
19th of July 2008 (Sat), 08:56
Cropped it. Please let me know what you think

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3172/2681706799_240901a12f_b.jpg

kenyc
19th of July 2008 (Sat), 11:28
[quote=silversldr;5941323]Cropped it. Please let me know what you think




I meant for you to crop the bottom off, not the top. Maybe I didn't say it right. I like the original image but with the bottom cropped right up to the reflection/puddle.


maybe something like this:

silversldr
19th of July 2008 (Sat), 11:47
Looks great that way. I was wondering if you saw something I didn't with my crop.

streetsilence
19th of July 2008 (Sat), 11:49
I really like this shot...as is! LOve the mood and the depth. Great capture.

Chet
19th of July 2008 (Sat), 11:50
Not another comedian in the bunch.