Japanese Fall

[Mariner]

http://www.pbase.com/image/5945673



Let me know what you think about this raw one. It is a Japanese Maple near the University of Washington campus. I am thinking about going lighter in the "tunnel" under the tree. Any other comments? Suggestions?

[eland]

Hi
Personally I wouldn't go lighter.

The sky reflection in the water (I presume) is a big distraction
for me. The picture is of Fall colors and the black and white reflection of tree trunks and sky does not contribute
to your composition.

I would crop off the black and white section and leave the
fall leaves, concentrating on the inverted V shape band
of leaves.

Play with Levels, Contrast, and perhaps Saturation and
then Unsharp Mast and you will have a very attractive
composition.

The bright values at the base of your image draw your
viewer's eye away from what you want them to see and
admire.

Regards
eland