Critique Please

[memories]

Did this at a church in Louisiana. Shot one with flash and this one with available light. This one is much better, I think. Just a small crop in PS.

[gsmx2]

This could be one of those pictures that should have been shot in RAW, then worked with to get the color balance to align with what your eye saw. I find the yellow tint to be distracting, but certainly can see that the built in flash would not work well.

gsm x2

[kawter2]

im not really liking it,,

the WB is too warm, the framing on the foot should be in the bottom left 3rd (and im usually not a huge 3rds guy) and it doesnt seem very sharp.


I can not a positive that the contrast looks great