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Distinction
20th of July 2008 (Sun), 20:30
This is my first share in this forums, and I need your suggestions. Thanks!
#1
http://pic.yupoo.com/distinction/062895e6b9e3/custom.jpg

#2
http://pic.yupoo.com/distinction/596265e6b995/custom.jpg

#3
http://pic.yupoo.com/distinction/011395e6b995/custom.jpg

#4
http://pic.yupoo.com/distinction/643925e6b996/custom.jpg

#5
http://pic.yupoo.com/distinction/824725e6b2ca/custom.jpg

#6
http://pic.yupoo.com/distinction/012755e6b2ca/custom.jpg

#7
http://pic.yupoo.com/distinction/723415e6abbf/custom.jpg

embdude
21st of July 2008 (Mon), 19:57
I like the out of focus areas on the first one but the subject needs to be better defined. What were you trying to achieve with these shots?

They seem sort of spur of the moment, perhaps spend some more time with your subject and develope it more fully...

BillsBayou
22nd of July 2008 (Tue), 11:23
Is that last guy gonna eat my tomatoes?

DogBreath
22nd of July 2008 (Tue), 15:58
i like number 5:D

MCB
24th of July 2008 (Thu), 14:40
I like #5. A little more depth of field would be good. I like how it gets out of focus in the distance, but seeing a little bit more in focus would be nice. I like it in B&W. Maybe more contrast would work well.

Distinction
12th of August 2008 (Tue), 19:27
I like the out of focus areas on the first one but the subject needs to be better defined. What were you trying to achieve with these shots?

They seem sort of spur of the moment, perhaps spend some more time with your subject and develope it more fully...

Thank you for your suggestion!

Distinction
12th of August 2008 (Tue), 19:30
i like number 5:D

Thank you!

Distinction
12th of August 2008 (Tue), 19:31
I like #5. A little more depth of field would be good. I like how it gets out of focus in the distance, but seeing a little bit more in focus would be nice. I like it in B&W. Maybe more contrast would work well.

Thank you for your suggestion!:)

jsvphoto
13th of August 2008 (Wed), 00:36
Number 5 is a very nice shot. Do you have the same shot using different aperture settings?

The others are a little too busy in the backgrounds for my taste. The leaf pointing across the flower in Number 6 is a little distracting. The same could be said of the leaves in front of the tomatoes in Number 3.

BLS
13th of August 2008 (Wed), 07:37
I like the tomato shot (#3) the best. The lighting and color give it a pleasant, relaxed feeling.
I think it might have benefited from plucking the leaf that obscures the yellow tomatoes and from cropping out the brown vertical bar on the right.

Distinction
13th of August 2008 (Wed), 19:47
Number 5 is a very nice shot. Do you have the same shot using different aperture settings?

The others are a little too busy in the backgrounds for my taste. The leaf pointing across the flower in Number 6 is a little distracting. The same could be said of the leaves in front of the tomatoes in Number 3.

I have only one shot of the pillar, but I test other aperture settings next time:D

And thanks for your suggestion, some of the background are too complex. I'll do some improvement.

Distinction
13th of August 2008 (Wed), 19:51
I like the tomato shot (#3) the best. The lighting and color give it a pleasant, relaxed feeling.
I think it might have benefited from plucking the leaf that obscures the yellow tomatoes and from cropping out the brown vertical bar on the right.

Thanks. I like the tomato too. All my shots have not been cut, perhaps I should do more late PS:lol:

FocalPrincess
15th of August 2008 (Fri), 12:15
I like number 5, to be honest I'm not sure the "point" of number 1, and the others are "ok."

skatchkins
15th of August 2008 (Fri), 18:12
5 is winner by far.
Good shot

Distinction
18th of August 2008 (Mon), 06:25
I like number 5, to be honest I'm not sure the "point" of number 1, and the others are "ok."

Thank you!

Distinction
18th of August 2008 (Mon), 06:26
5 is winner by far.
Good shot

Thank you!