Fashion Shoot

[NikonF4s]

Some stuff I took last year for a friend who is a Fashion Designer. Didn't use any lights, just a 50mm 1.8
I liked the result, but I think it could have been better with lighting, any critique welcome.

[Les]

Let me try.
I like the first one, the only thing I would change is to crop the right side almost to the white vertical line.
Second one - IMO her face expression doesn't work well with the rest of the image.
How about her sitting on one of the washing machines, holding magazine and just catching a glimpse of you?
She's very attractive BTW. What launromat she's using this days? ;)

[NikonF4s]

Haha, unfortunately, if you don't live in new zealand, the likelyhood of you meeting Michelle at Grey Lynn Laundromat is fairly unlikely!!

[Les]

Better!
Does somebody know how much is a plane ticket form US to New Zealand?
Also, how many quarters do I need to bring with me ?

[NILOLIGIST]

I think you could have used a flash and brighten it up a bit...Also, you could have bumped up the ISO or the apeture. The last shot has too much saturation.


Another thing is I would have had her throwing the clothes around or interacting with the clothes since she is at the laundry...

NiL,

[Jetmech1]

Haha, unfortunately, if you don't live in new zealand, the likelyhood of you meeting Michelle at Grey Lynn Laundromat is fairly unlikely!!
For some reason I really like this one. It just stands out. She is beautiful. The orange tights just made my day.

[Ballen Photo]

I think you could have used a flash and brighten it up a bit...Also, you could have bumped up the ISO or the apeture. The last shot has too much saturation.


Another thing is I would have had her throwing the clothes around or interacting with the clothes since she is at the laundry...

NiL,I agree with Nil on all of the above. Michelle is very good looking, and has potential. You should do another shoot with Her real soon.;)
Other than this, the shots look good. :D
-Bruce

[KevC]

She's gorgeous. Awesome shots, very nice. I can't wait till my 50mm gets here. Now if I could only find models that pretty... :)

[J.A.F. Doorhof]

The third one for me, I love everything about that shot.
The first two I don't know but they don't really jump out to me.

LOVE the model :D.

[NikonF4s]

thanks to everyone, it's nice to get other opinions, I do have another shoot featuring Michelle, which I actually shot 2 years ago, will post a few from that, but it wasn't the best shoot!