Small audience

[brycimus]

Took this picture of my friend playing his guitar. We're at the beach (Hatteras, NC). We're on the sound side so we get some nice sunsets. WB shift, noise reduction, straighten/crop and brightness bump, all done in lightroom. C&C are welcome and encouraged.

ISO 1600, F 2.8, 1/60, 17mm

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/5323/davidguitarsb5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Thanks for looking

[Vetteography]

I like it... kind of a wistful, cowboy around the campfire feel to it, if that makes sense.

[Chet]

I would like to see it composed a bit more from the other direction, I'm sure the person playing guitar is the subject in the picture, not the room in the window. He is looking off somewhere, I'd like to be more a part of that. Cutting off part of your subject is also not recommended.

[brycimus]

his foot isnt cut off in the original but the left part of the house wasnt straight up and down so the tip of his foot got cut off when straightened, i might try again for a better scene a.k.a. without the house so much, but i do kind of like the roof in the frame, thanks for the comments so far

[René Damkot]

I would like to see it composed a bit more from the other direction, I'm sure the person playing guitar is the subject in the picture, not the room in the window. He is looking off somewhere, I'd like to be more a part of that. Cutting off part of your subject is also not recommended.

Agree... He needs more "space" to look into.

[tomcat360]

Maybe bump the fill light a bit to bring out some more?