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jamaican_sole
9th of August 2008 (Sat), 02:53
these shots were taken roughly 2 hours ago, right after i got out of class. happened to have my gear in my car, so i decided to use the opportunity to get in some practice.

here's the first one
1)http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3223/2746315674_e8ca2c6e71_b.jpg
Camera: Canon EOS 30D
Exposure: 0.003 sec (1/350)
Aperture: f/2.8
Focal Length: 28 mm
ISO Speed: 640
Exposure Bias: 0/2 EV
Flash: Flash did not fire

an attempt at dave hill photography. didn't even come close...
2)http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3150/2745479489_b1e10755d6_b.jpg
Camera: Canon EOS 30D
Exposure: 0.003 sec (1/350)
Aperture: f/2.8
Focal Length: 28 mm
ISO Speed: 640
Exposure Bias: 0/2 EV
Flash: Flash did not fire


3)http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3033/2745501449_22fc22b7ac_b.jpg
Camera: Canon EOS 30D
Exposure: 0.017 sec (1/60)
Aperture: f/2.8
Focal Length: 75 mm
ISO Speed: 800
Exposure Bias: 0/2 EV
Flash: Flash did not fire


i was using a external flash mounted off camera, and bounced off the parking garage ceiling. unfortunately ceiling wasn't white, but a combination of various shades of gray. this lowered the out put of the flash and caused me to have to bump up the iso a bit so that i could extend the range and get some light on the subject. in the future i'll be picking up some umbrella's, and some triggers so that i'll have some freedom to move about and not be "teathered" to the flash. anyways crituque away, and as always, hold no punches.

FlyingPhotog
9th of August 2008 (Sat), 02:56
Not a bad portrait and the lighting looks pretty good. Nicely low key.

But:
- A bit too much headroom
- Feet are cut off
- Flash caught in turn signal of car way in the BG camera left
- There is a "P" growing out of your neck :)

rjc1
9th of August 2008 (Sat), 12:26
I am new to this but I like what I like.
I like the first, don't like the second, and like the third the best, It is well done.

jamaican_sole
9th of August 2008 (Sat), 15:05
took another shot at the first one. trying for something a bit more "dynamic". also got rid of the "growing p" lol!

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3038/2746921257_f9137c5c54_b.jpghttp://farm4.static.flickr.com/3223/2746315674_e8ca2c6e71_b.jpg

dinanm3atl
9th of August 2008 (Sat), 21:36
Fellow UTI graduate :)

Ford FACT?

jamaican_sole
10th of August 2008 (Sun), 00:43
Fellow UTI graduate :)

Ford FACT?


ha ha, yeah. my bud there is still in the core program and just started ford fact. i actually graduated back in may and i'm about to finish ford fact and move on to volvo. are you currently working in the field?