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Vetteography
9th of August 2008 (Sat), 14:04
I think the dialog needs some work.... :p:p

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Mike-DT6
9th of August 2008 (Sat), 14:12
:lol: I like it! Nice idea. The 'Hi-YAH!' bit made me laugh. The only thing I would suggest is a more dramatic ending!

Mike

:-)
Vetteography
9th of August 2008 (Sat), 14:17
For the shoot, she was trying to be hard-core goth-esque, but kept coming through as "I am a glamor model" mixed with girlish enthusiasm. I know, not very dramatic, but this was done on a lark and was fun!