Book for critique

[symes]

Folks,

I would like you to take a look at the middle 16 pages and let me know what you think...

This is from the first wedding I did over a year ago...the couple came back looking for a book...

Let me know

http://symplicity.ca/mpwbook/

Cheers,

Matt

[jsanz11]

I think you did a good job. I like it. I'm not sure why people don't really post comments on wedding albums. Everytime I see a post about a wedding album it never has responses. I like how you kept your album simple though. Great work!

[mamabravo]

love it

fellow neighbour (guelph)

[rebecca12]

Its lovely, the only thing I don't like is the placement of the photos on 4 it looks a bit thrown together compared to the others.

[divinemethod]

page 8/8 (or picture 8/8) what if you cropped the large portrait on the right to an 8x10 ratio and filled the page, and increased the sizes of the three pictures on the left to match. at the moment the black space seems like waster real estate to me.

[symes]

Thanks for the feedback folks - esp to jsanz11 for getting the ball rolling...

I think you're right about the thrown together look on the fourth page...I think I'd have to have about a million templates to add something to the background...But on the other hand if it were my book I think I would prefer it simple and let the photos stand out...

again thanks for the feedback - divinemethod - thanks for the feedback on the waste of real estate...well put...I'll look at reworking that...

Cheers,

[symes]

Thanks for the feedback folks - esp to jsanz11 for getting the ball rolling...

I think you're right about the thrown together look on the fourth page...I think I'd have to have about a million templates to add something to the background...But on the other hand if it were my book I think I would prefer it simple and let the photos stand out...

again thanks for the feedback - divinemethod - thanks for the feedback on the waste of real estate...well put...I'll look at reworking that...

Cheers,

[symes]

Thanks for the feedback folks - esp to jsanz11 for getting the ball rolling...

I think you're right about the thrown together look on the fourth page...I think I'd have to have about a million templates to add something to the background...But on the other hand if it were my book I think I would prefer it simple and let the photos stand out...

again thanks for the feedback - divinemethod - thanks for the feedback on the waste of real estate...well put...I'll look at reworking that...

Cheers,