you should look here and drop me a comment/critique ^_-

[clarity]

picture of my uncle and sister;
critique or say anything,
this is taken with my new 50mm 1.8
and a little post processing..
tia, - clarity

[Ballen Photo]

Hi Clarity, I like the portrait of your uncle, GREAT capture. :D

For the shot of your sister, I would have liked to have seen Her expression if you had prefocussed on Her face, then dropped a book or make a loud noise to catch Her attention, then snap the shot just as She turned to face you. :cool:
-Bruce

[charlesu]

Hmmm, critique? OK

The Raiders need to shore up the offensive line and add a some strength in blocking on the left side. They also need a more credible running game. The O line can help but they need a better back too. :)

Seriously, not sure I see a problem with either for what they are. Uncle's teeth might need a little help as they have a yellow tint. The second pic has a yellow cast to it.

[Eric DeCastro]

sister shot might look better cropped tighter. like head and sholders. but both look great.

[Candid Bandit]

I don't know why no one said this yet, but I'm sure your sis is waiting for this comment. She is freaking hawttt !! ( Is she dating anyone?) Nice shot of uncle there too.. kekeee

[jO3]

hmm, do you have a friend named Jason Laurea from Petaluma? Your sis looks very familiar...

Anywho, critique? Excellent composition in the first shot, and the clarity of the pic is great.

Second shot, I'd like to see your sister framed more tightly towards the left of the shot, looking right into the empty space to the right (her left) And honestly, I'm somewhat distracted of the hanging sign on the right... And like Charles said, the white balance could use slight correction... Otherwise, I think this shot would make an amazing sepia shot.

Overall quality is great!

[KevC]

Yes, Candid is right. Your sister is very pretty. I really like both shots! Maybe a little cropping for the second one, it seems like the stuff on the far right is too 'in focus' compared to the rest of the background blurriness :)

[jgbeam]

Nice candids. :) #1 be careful with eyeglass shots. #2 background too busy.

Jim

[clarity]

hey, thanks for all the critiques and comments people;
jgbeam-il be sure to watchout for those tricky eyeglass
shots,and yea the background was busy cuz i took that
in an oakland kfc which was ghetto! haha. kevc - yea il
try to crop it later on, or take some more pics not in kfc
haha!. jo3 - sorry no jo, i do not know a Jason Laurea
from Petaluma, heck i dont know where petaluma is
at;) the first shot was taken at a morgue, and i was
surprised to see my uncle with a smile, so i had to take it,
haha ninja status jk:cool: and the sis pic, yea i just used a
autowhitebalance:rolleyes: my bad:cry:.candid bandit - i had to
show my sister that comment u gave, we wer laffin it up:D
she sed thx for the comment, + thx for the uncle comment.
eric - thanks for dropin by and leavin a comment + advice :p.
charlesu - HAHAHA ROFLOL, great critique, too bad im not a
raiders fan, im more of a 49ers fan :) and yeah my uncle
does have a little yellow tint to his teeth :lol:. ballen - thx
for the uncle comment, and yeah i agree with you on that
sister comment haha, i should try that next time.:eek: .. thanks
thanks all you guys :D

[mr.photoguy]

I think the 2nd image could be croped tighter.
crop out the 2 big floresant lights on the top and the girl with the white shirt on the left hand side. Then give her a slight view to the right.
Nice Candid.
she's HOT..